Heretics and Colonizers : PhD Thesis Comments and Corrections
by Andrei Conovaloff, 1999 — updated 17 June 2018.

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PAGE	ERRORS and COMMENTS
1	Show full text of decree by Tsar Nicholas, Oct 20, 1830
2	Klibanov shows that in 1909: 23% of Molokane and Pryguny were in the Caucasus, Far East 31%, Volga 31%, and Central 15%. I'll have to send you the review I published in 1980 so you can double check my summary tables. 
6 F 114 	Molokan Heritage Collection Volume I 
11 Line 2	Add that many Germans were also settled in New Russia
13 Line 1	"...sectarians comprised the majority [75%] of Russians..."
14 F 32	re: "reductionism", give an example for us who don't know precisely what you are comparing.  Klibanov told me that everything he wrote was the truth, but there was a lot that he could not mention.  He challenged us in 1992 to send graduate students to him so he can show us where all the ethnic Molokan material is in the archives. He said that his work was affected by the policies from superiors, and he had already suffered 26 years in the gulag for his graduate work on Mennonites, for which his professor and mentor was killed. 
15 Line 2	"... Other sects: Dukhobortsy, Iconobors, Molokane ...." See page 47, footnote 56.
15 F34	change and to as —> ...Subbotniks as Sabbatarians...
15	Placing Russian sectarians among the German colonies shown on maps by Karl Stumpp would be a first. This would help illustrate first paragraph. Much more has been documented in English about the Germans who were more literate and free to keep records than the "heretics".
15      	Khlysty — the only Khlyst village I have been able to locate was reported in Armenia on the north shore of Lake Sevan in Nadezhda (Also, Shorzhi) village. But, Dukh-i-zhiniki in Armenia from Shorzha claim Khlysty never lived there. They report that about half of their original settlers were ethnic Mordvi from central Russia, who could have been influenced by Khlysty, which could explain why they are not in agreement with other Maksimisty.   
15      	A useful perspective is to list as many of the approx. 100 sectarian labels as possible with a brief description. 
15      	A timeline graph with major events — Tsars, decrees, movements, etc — will help.
18 (mid page)	 "In place of the Bible, Dukhobors..." Many Doukhobors brought Bibles from Russia to Canada which are on display in the Doukhobor Discovery Centre, Castlegar BC. True, some are afraid of reading the Bible on their own because they might become mislead, others who were literate knew the Bible well. I feel like you are stereotyping, so I suggest using terms like "in general", or "most Dukhobors", particularly at the 3rd line from the bottom: "Dukhobors were ruled by a single Christ-leader." Everyone who lived in the obschina did not have the same mind-set. Later, more than one leader emerged at a time, and the Dukhobors split. But, I bet there were people who considered themselves to be Doukhobors who did not cherish an earthly Christ-leader. Compare to when Maksim Rudometkin died, the followers divided into 3 groups, I think. 
19	 "the word kills, and the spirit gives life" Last year I found an article about Doukhobors which attributed this line to them as justification for not reading scripture. So we'd better account for all versions, particularly in the sensitive religious arena.
19	It would be good if we could diagram/map/chart the various sub-groups of Molokans with summaries. Several of us in America have tried it. I published one diagram in my 1980 Molokan Directory trying to interpret Klibanov. But I don't think he mentioned the Vodnye or Presniki. You missed Maksimisti. Also, on 299 you spell "vodianyi".
20 Line 1	"special powers from God" were indeed assumed by MGR, which has influenced all American/Australian Dukh-i-zhiniki. 
20 Mid	In 4 of 8 Jewish encyclopedias I've seen, Molokans are indexed as "judaizers". There must be broad gray areas and connections among Pryguny, Maksimisty and Subbotniki.
21 F46	define "Gery" = Christian who converts to Judaism, no longer a Gentile. Also related to 277 F13.
22 Line 4 	"...or writers who relate [to] them."
22	A summary, or list, of what is in the archives would be amazing to many here. What kind of artwork?
23 Paragraph 2	"...biases and must [not much] be approached.."
23 F52	I think you inserted Berokoff's SELECTIONS.. where you meant MOLOKANS IN AMERICA. See Page 357. Note that I put it on the web at  http://molokane.org/molokan/Berokoff/
And you left off the DUK I ZHIZN' and it's English translation. 
25	Again it would be good to see the entire decree of 1830.
30 Line 3	In Russia Molokane told me that scattered along every river valley from the Volga to the Amur are Molokan and Doukhobor villages. The most concentrated population being in Blagoveschensk, Far East, where the largest Molokan church ever built in Russia (before perestroika) still stands. Now the largest church is in Kochubeevskoe, Stavropol’skii krai.
31 Paragraph 2	regarding the Russian "corporatist approach to religious toleration": define "corporatist" and "corporate" (also on pages 80 & 83). These attitudes are the essence of the 1997 Law on Religion, but today accept the historic sectarians as "narod", a major change. Many American Maksimisty still express fear of the Orthodox. Also see page. 176.
32	Though foreign religions had freedom, the master policy of concentrating them along the border as soldiers without arms (my phrase), far from the center, applied to all.  
35 Paragraph 1, last sentence: "...1904-05...civil rights..." But by then 1/3 of all Russian Doukhobors moved and large groups of ethnic Molokans began to move from the Kars war zone.
36 F26	"..included prayer houses.." (Also see the similar footnote 96, page 60, and page 97 middle) Then explain the Doukhobor Kapustin's compound or central meeting house in Terpenie, Melitopol raion. I believe that sketch of it appears in Haxthausen's original book, not the English version. I saw it in a French edition and the USCC has published it. It may be in one of Koozma's books. See:  http://www.doukhobor.org/Haxthausen.htm  and   http://www.cipdd.org/cipdd/_MELIKISHVILI/religion.htm
They built a fort-like yard, with high fence, met mostly outside under a roof (which may be the loophole for church) and developed the "protazhnya" (drawn-out singing) so soldiers and listeners outside could not understand them. Today it still takes them 5 minutes to sing a few lines of "Ochi" or "Be Devout". Also, during Communism, attending funerals among all religions was the only religious activity that was not suspicious, but everyone had to use the red clothed casket, usually provided by the kolkhoz.
	Good to chart:
36	"affiliation" -vs- "public displays"
37	"right to exist" -vs- "overt displays", "attempts to spread", "tempt the Orthodox"
49	"faith" -vs- "acts of faith"
84	"to be sectarian" -vs- "spreading", tempting", "converting", "unruly behavior",..

42 Line 3	Name? Which village?  There may be a connection with the Freedomites in Canada.
42 Middle	"..estate peasant from [not "form"] Tambov.."
47	To bad you don't name villages, for more precision. So in 1820 there were already some Molokane in Tauride province? 
52	Show "desiatinas" in metric(hectare) and English(acres) units. 37.5 desiatinas at 2.7 des./ac. = 101.25, about 100 acres.  At 2.47 hectare/ac. — about 250 hectares.  Should translate for the reader. And should chart the benefits offered to sectarians to settle in each region versus what the Orthodox, or Germans got. In 1980 I summarized this from Klibanov: 
	Region	Land Allotment
	Central	40 acres
	Volga	80
	Far East	270
	Caucasus	500-1,000
I don't think he mentioned the Milky Waters
52 F72	Check Grellet and Stevens? (the journals of the Quakers who toured in 1820). I scanned parts referring to Molokans and Doukhobors but haven't posted them yet.
53 line 2 from bottom: "..indeed the majority.." How much—75%?
56 Line 	relate monetary amount to something today. 1/2 kopeck ~ loaf of bread. 88r 66.5k ~ $18,000. And clarify: this was 1/3 of ALL public official salaries?
59 Middle (Same as page 30 above) 
59 end of paragraph 1 — 1 verst = 1.067 km = .6629 miles, so 25 versts = about 27 km, or 16.6 miles.
60 F96: see page 36 above.
62 Line 2	"..short-term leaves from [not form] their domiciles.." This can be called "village arrest". In general, I'm interpreting your thesis to my ethnic Molokan friends this way: In Russia we were felons for thinking or acting. We were arrested just as a drug dealer is today—for possession or use of illegal drugs—in our case illegal religion. Later the Tsar gave us freedom of thought but not action in public. So we could carry drugs for personal use, but could not show them to anyone else but a sectarian in secret; and we were concentrated in the Milky Waters area but put under village arrest, so we could not contaminate other villages.
63 Paragraph 2, line 7: "..— [+they] found [+that].."
64 Line 2	"..the new place.." The casual reader will think that all sectarians went to Transcaucasus, even though you mention Siberia earlier. See page 2 above.
64 Paragraph 2, line 1: "..57 Dukhobors.." but on page 71 middle it's "..86 Dukhobor men.."
64 Paragraph 2, line 2: "stanitsy" = Cossack village (not defined) 
64 Paragraph 2, line 7: ".. involved to [+the] New Russian..." 
65 Middle	Where is "Caucasian oblast"? You mention it again on page 70, line 1.
65  F104	See Quaker Grellet's 1819 journal where the Molokans say they have not yet resolved the Bible's instructions to obey Caesar, AND do not kill. Luckily, Molokans in the military had not been in combat. Also check page 98, footnote 48.
66 Line 5	change "..was much higher.." to "..was almost double.."
67 F109, F110 and page 71: Should make a table and map to explain all kinds of Cossacks: Don, sectarian, Doukhobor (were there Molokan too?) Caucasian, Nekrasov, Siberian, Line.  For Nekrasov, see Molokan Heritage Collection: Volume II on Turkey. There were large villages of Nekrasov at the southern shore of Lake Manyas, ~ 200 mi. SW of Istanbul, for about 300 years, undisturbed. They moved back to Russia in 1962 when the remaining Kars Molokans were moved, mostly to northern Stavropol'skii krai, concentrated in and around Levokumskoye.
71 Line 1	We'll have to show on the map where the "Caucasian line" is. Is it the boarder?
72 Paragraph 2, line 3: define "Ataman"   (Ottoman?)
75 Paragraph 2, last sentence: "Transcaucasus...sole remaining...vessel...to segregate the sectarians." Only 23% were there. See page 64 line 2, and page 2 above. 
79 Line 5	estimate how many "tens of thousands"
79 Last 2 lines	"Resettlement" continued in Canada with the "trek" of the Doukhobors back to Russia, and with the American Molokane first to Russia (Rostov village of Kalifornia in 1920s), then the Maksimisty "pakhod" in the 1960s to Australia and in the 1970s to Brazil. 
80 middle	Need chart defining merchant, meshchane, state peasant, odnodvorsty, serf, estate peasant, economic peasant (114 mid, and 115 F118), bonded peasants (224 line 7), udel'naia peasant (292 mid), pomeshchik (285), etc (for the non-Russian historian). 
80 Line 3, and Page 83, last line of paragraph 2: define "corporate" (group?)
81 Paragraph 2, line 5: In 1842 Melitopol on the Milky River was named from the Greek the "honey city". 
84 Lines 2-5	Similarly 1/3 of all Doukhobors migrated to Canada in 4 large groups in 2 years, whereas ethnic Molokans and Subbotniki migrated to America in small groups, most over a 7 year period.
90 Paragraph 2, line 1: define "New Russia" (Ukraine?) Novorossiya
90 Line 6 from bottom: "[+Third,] tied in with ..."
94 F31	what's "(n.p.: n.p., 1983)"?  (no page number?)
95 F53	What "context" "Outside of a purely religious" — "economic reasons" as in page 101 paragraph 2?
97 Last sentence	This was repeated when the Canadian Doukhobor Freedomite kids were taken from their parents and place in the New Denver boarding schools in the 1950s. Also, when the German kids in Ukraine were required to attend Russian schools and be drafted, many moved. 
97 F41	Make a time graph of the frequency of decrees. Also, is there a published summary/index of all decrees, particularly those regarding sectarians.
99 Middle	Is "The Triumphant Tale.." by Jung-Stilling? You don't mention the author. 
In 1815, the mystical Martinist freemason, Aleksandr Fedorovich Labzin (1766-1825), made a free translation and abridgment of Jung-Stilling's commentaries on Revelation that he published in a single volume under the title The Victorious Tale, or the Triumph of the Christian Religion. (Clay 2111)
99 line 2 from bottom: "..the south" The legend/prophesy of pakhod to the south continued in America as Australia (100 families mid 1960s), Mt. Ararat (1 family 1990s), South America (30 families 1970s, all returned), and Mexico (5 families prepared since 1970s).
100 Paragraph 2, line 3: "..new Jerusalem.." became Zion for those who left to America. Freedomites near Castlegar named the local mountain Zion, and Maksimisty in Los Angeles have many songs and references to those who came as Zion, many even including the Constants as Zion because they obeyed the prophesy to leave Russia. Do you have an origin for these Zionists, besides the Bible? For the Jews, Zion became Israel. The original Jewish Zion was to be a limited selection of high quality Jews capable of building Israel into an economically successful nation. 
100 Paragraph 2, line 5: "In 1833..." our oral history says, a great "out pouring of the Holy Spirit" and Jumping appeared in the Milky Waters area. God blessed only the Molokans with this gift. They became the chosen ones to protect the Holy Spirit from the 666 false faiths. See Harry Shubin's history in the UMCA Directories. You don't mention this, which the zealous elders in America would say is the most important event in the creation of "our" Molokans, meaning Dukh-i-zhiniki. Then the American elders say we introduced jumping and hand raising to America, though other faiths in America don't acknowledge learning these practice from immigrant Russians. I'm pointing out one of the most sensitive parts of the American ethnic Molokan attitude, and a topic of the highest interest to many in America. Danny Shubin would say that since you are not "in the Spirit" (his Spirit) you cannot understand our history. (Only he can interpret it for us.)
101 F57	"Quite the opposite…" of what? This phrase appears to negate the first 2 sentences references, but it doesn't. Delete the phrase.
101 F58	Also the Milky Waters area stories of Prophet Elijah who leaped from the back of a wagon announcing he was going to heaven but fell on a lady. 
... Elijah appeared, in the person of a Melitopol peasant called Belozvorof, who announced that on a given day he would ascend into heaven ... a great crowd .. failed .. handed .. to police as an imposter by the Molokanye .. (Wallace 1905) 
.. An Elias appeared .. in 1833 in the person of Terence Byelozorov of Melitopol ..foretold .. reascend to heaven. ..desperate leapings and waving of his arms attempted like Simon Magus and St Peter to take to the air. ..  he was locked up .. In 1836 a false Messiah from Moldavia..  Lukian Petrov .. impersonate Enoch and Elias .. start for the Caucasus .. for the second Advent  ..they .. Two other false Messiahs appeared among the Molokanye of Samara .. ascension into Heaven .. by an Elder .. New Zion at Alexandropol .. wings with which he attempted flights from house tops and summits of hills .. (Conybeare 1921)
101 bottom 	1 verst = 1.067 km = .6629 miles, so 30 versts about 32 km, or 20 miles.
102 paragraph 2, middle  -  Petrov: The most active family in Tambov today are the Petrov's. Father Sergei posted the first Russian Molokan web site with 5 years of published articles, and daughter Elena transcribed some of their archived history, teaches their Sunday School and helped launched the Youth Council.
104 line 7	Klibanov: "only … state peasants chose to resettle…" , but on page 80 the 1830 decree applied ONLY to state peasants.
107 F91	define "spiritual consistory" = A church tribunal or governing body.. Also it's capitalized on page 111 line7.
108 line 6, and 152 line 4 — NCO ? define = Non-Commissioned Officer ?
109 top, 158 middle, 189 line 4 from bottom — You report that sectarians began to arrive in the Transcaucasus in 1830, and many Molokans voluntarily beginning in 1833 seeking the millennium and believing the rumor of military exemption. Though no such military exemption existed because those draftable were forbidden from migrating. Many ignored the law and fled to the Transcaucasus to avoid the draft. But a legend that Molokans got special privileges (50 years of exemption ending 1889) continues in America. Double-check Berokoff page 16-17 Chap 1 for errors. He infers that Molokans were "granted" 50 years of military exemption, which ended in 1889. Men 21 years old were conscripted for 5 years. Then Russia crossed the Caspian Sea to acquire Turkistan, and Molokans were offered 10 years of military exemption. 100s moved. About this time the Klubnikin prophesy to flee to America begins. [Similar restrictions regarding conscription and attending Russian schools placed on Germans and Mennonites in the 1880's in south Ukraine initiated their exodus]. (Later in Berokoff, page 138 chap 8) After collectivization, many of those in Turkistan fled into Iran/Persia, and most in Iran came to America in 1949-52.
114 line 4 from bottom — My late babunya Shubin (mother's mother) in Los Angeles gave me this lesson several times when I lived with her in the 1960s. If someone in need comes to your house for food or help, you (a Christian) always help them, even if they are running from the police. She acted as if someone came to the door, she opened the door, hears their plea, invites them in and quickly hides them under the table. Then she acts out a conversation with the police. She didn't see any body. When the police are far gone, she gives the person some food and shoos them from her house. Also, a Berekoff widower in Pasadena (his family are dominant Maksimisty in LA, so this story is better known) found a burglar in his house. Berekoff talked the frightened fellow into sitting down for a meal, gave him some money and said their was no need to steal, he could come anytime for help and to visit. The burglar cried, thanked him and was never seen again.  I don't recall if Bill Moore got that story in Oral Traditions.
116 F120 line 4 — "…a not insignificant.." awkward, better: "…a significant.."
115 line 2	Alty-Agach in Shirvan provintsiia, but on page 118 line 3 from bottom, it's in Shirvan guberniia. Also you say Sirvan uezd on page 135, middle. The map will clear this up. It's probably Shirvan provintsiia, and guberniia. Later you change formats for locations using parenthesis. Should be consistent.
120 paragraph 1 — Any info on what village these Skopsy settled in the Transcaucasus?
133 table	good to indicate locate these with raion/provinstiia/guberniia
135 paragraph 2 mid — 2,000 in 12 years is a funeral every other day, 3-4 a week, 15 a month….
150 mid	"Second, …. I [?] also highlighting…"   Something is missing.
153 paragraph 2 — 2 Voronstovas ? Here Aleksandropol' uezd, but on page 161 and 180, Borchalo uezd. Then which Voronstovka on page 136, middle?
153 F10, 233 middle — Anton Chekhov in "The Horse-Robbers" characterized Molokans as ruthless vigilantes for justice. 
155 paragraph 2 line 3, 291 middle — "domestic servants": When Molokans arrived in Glendale, Arizona in 1911 the paper reported in a long front page article with 2 pictures that among economic benefits these settlers bring is "the servant girl problem is solved". The elders evidently knew their strong points from experiences in Erevan.
155 line 3 from bottom — "laundry": In the 1920s, the largest employer of immigrant Molokan women/girls was the laundry near the Flats owned by Demens.
156 line 3	renting:  my great-grandfather Shubin had a motel, of sorts, in Kars across from the train station, which often housed soldiers. My grandmother Shubin, who arrived in LA at age 14, could sing many ditties (fast Russian folk songs) on Russian records I bought. She said she learned them from the soldiers. Though illiterate, she also could distinguish between the colloquial Russian spoken by ethnic Molokans who came from the villages, and her vocabulary. She often was embarrassed of their hillbilly-like expressions and accents.
156 line 	] …. Delete at beginning
156 line 4 from bottom — so Molokans dominated the trucking, taxi, and bus services? See 190 and 262 below. In Hawaii in June 1906, the Pryguny and Molokane argued that in Russia they were wagon drivers (droshky) not sugar cane harvesters.
157 end of paragraph 2, and 161 line 6 from bottom  — rasputitsa = slush, melted muddy snow, also on page 161 line 6 from bottom.
157 line from bottom, 261 middle — see Turkdogan, Molokan Heritage Collection, Volume II, "Molokans in Turkey" for pictures and discussion of contribution of Molokans to farming (Molokan dairy cow, Malakan/Malakin/Ardahan horse), tools, and teaching the locals to make soap and cheese.
157 line 2 from bottom — Both I.G.Samarin, page 201, and Platon Patapov had flour mills near Kars. A photo of Patapov mill, now a home, taken by his great granddaughter. 
http://molokane.org/molokan/Kars/
and Strubhar’s work-in-progress color photos are at:
http://molokane.org/molokan/Kars/1987
158 Indent	"…decent bakers"  In LA my grandfather Shubin ran the best Molokan bakery until he died in the 40's. Across the street was Klubnikin's bakery, which they moved when the Big Church moved due to freeway construction and operated until Bill retired 5 years ago. Now Jews rent it to make Jewish pastry. 
158 line 3 from bottom  — To bad you didn't include more names, dates and places for reference. 
160 lines 3 & 4, 161 line 8, 162 line 4 — define "zwieback" (German: usually a sweetened bread baked a loaf then sliced and toasted.), or use the Russian word, if there is one, with translation. 
163 line 1	"battle over Ardagana" reminds me of a reference in the Russian -Turkish war to the “Molokan plain” where a battle was fought. The book had several maps of Kars oblast battles but did not label this place.
170 last line	"soslovie" in italics and defined: "urban class", bourgeoisie, middle class?
171 line 5 from bottom — .."exception of Tiflis". By 1912 Molokans had settled a large neighborhood near the main train station, today called “Molokan Square,” and built a 2-story school and religious center that published their first orders of worship and prayer books in 1912.
172 F56	"..located at great distance form sectarians.."  Balance this with your report of runaway Orthodox serfs an clandestine migrants, 113-119, especially 114 F120 Alty-Agach, and 113 F113 plasticity of identity. 
174 line 2	What year was Kars incorporated? Most American ethnic Molokans are from Kars oblast. Detail here will help to create sales interest.
175 	No obvious "First" to begin the series. "Second" at 176 paragraph 2. "Third" at 178 line 3.
176 middle	"… separate religious phenomena…" yet often difficult to separate, compare to pages 16-18, "…not discrete...blending…" I don't think you support this phrase
176 last paragraph continuing on 177 — This attitude continues today as the 1997 Law on Religion, in its contradictions, vague wording, uneven application, and political/religious/foreign policy debate.
177 line 4 from bottom — "…spread forbidden books…" Which books? This would be an interesting list.
180 line 10 	"…land crisis in 1850 …" More detail in Blanchard, Ian. Economic Decline in the Early Nineteenth Century, Imperial Russia, 1700-1917, Lectures 8-11, Handout pages 2+.
181 middle	8,000 desiatinas. = 21,600 acres = about 34 square miles!
181 line 5 from bottom — 7 rubles/des. = about 74 kopecks/acre, 470R/sq.mi.!
183 last paragraph line 2 — "…the running of [the] empire."
184 line 2	"…this politics of …" Awkward?  Perhaps "policy". [Better, says Ethel Dunn]
185 middle	"…their chief was the incarnation of the son of God…" like Maksim Gavarilich Rudametkin was for the Maksimisty.
186	Great find! This Prygun song.
187 middle	"In 1884, …paid off the [15 year]…"  page 182
188 paragraph 2 — "…Kars…1908…love…devotion…dear Rus…" contrast with the 4,500 (Berokoff page 53, though Harry Shubin believes this to be way too high, more like 2,500) who were fleeing to the U.S. from 1907 to 1912.
190 line 3	"1870" the railroad decreased the lucrative sectarian wagon monopoly[?], page 156, [perhaps 30%]. You don't remind the reader that a major component of the 1870 downturn, if not the major, was the completion of the railroad to Erevan, and on page 262 you add competition from Tatars.
190 middle, 244 F108 —"…burnt all arms…" Important to say in 3 locations, and the severity was most intense closer to Tiflis, which influenced migration to Canada. See:  Historic 1895 Burning of Guns: descriptions, selections and translations, by Koozma J. Tarasoff and Andrei Conovaloff, 2009.
190 line from bottom — "…publicity [and aide]…" Also details: About one-third of all Doukhobors, 7,500, migrated in 4 ship-loads in 2 years [or 18 months?]; compared to about 1% of all ethnic Molokans, 4,500 over a 5 years, the largest group being 300. Sawatzky, Robert J. A comparison of the Mennonite and Doukhobor emigrations from Russia to Canada, 1870-1920 (1998 PhD thesis).
190 last line	"…scouts across the sea." Berokoff, Chapter 1.
195 F117	Double-check Shubin's editing of the "Spirit and Life". Many who financed the publishing of Volkoff's translation (10 years after he gave it to the UMCA) were disappointed that Danny edited it his way, to make it appear Biblical. You may need to quote the Russian version. Also know that the Russian version was extensively (30%) censored. Ethel Dunn has a copy of the restored "Spirit and Life" which Danny originally proposed to translate starting with Volkoff's manuscript. He then chickened out which many only discovered after publication. The Maksimist eroticism, weird rituals, and statements were too much to bear. There's a high interest market among Maksimisty for information. 
195 F118	More information please about the 1847 meeting, which may have been the first of its kind. The only big one we know of was in 1905 in Voronstovka (Tashir, Armenia) to celebrate the centennial of religious freedom.
196 bottom	"Subbotniki …Jewish …"  Almost identical to 277 F13.
197 paragraph 2 — In what years did the rabbi lead, and the 22 weddings occur? Any names? 
199-200	"…negation of Russian…" The paradox is after Molokans and Doukhobors arrived they continuously talk about returning, and intensely adhere to Russian language and song for worship. About 20 Molokane from San francisco joined their Kars area relatives on the Sal'skii steppe, Rostov oblast, in the 1920s when they left Kars as it was given to Turkey. They founded the village of Kalifornia. Upon Collectivization, most returned to California. In LA, Molokans elders forbade Berokoff from publishing anything translated because they were soon returning to Russia. He waited until WWII started and most Dukh-i-zhiznik boys enlisted. In his first preface he wrote that it was then obvious they were not leaving America. One of the reasons over 100 families fled to Australia was to preserve the language. Several American Dukh-i-zhizniki  have been ostracized from membership for speaking too much in English when invited to speak during service, and for attending American churches. When 5 couples founded the first Re-Formed Molokan church in Woodburn, Oregon, with optional translated English services and song, all Dukh-i-zhizniki  congregations "officially" disowned them, claiming the First Re-Formed Molokan Church to be "American", part of 666 false faiths. Russian School has been part of the UMCAs in LA and Kerman for decades, with varied success.  The Doukhobors have been more successful in Russian language retention, even negotiating Soviet university programs without Communism classes. Over 100 have spent a year or more in intensive/immersion Russian, compared to 3 Dukh-i-zhiznik  girls that I know of and none married in. The USCC-Doukhobors have an active standing committee exploring migration back to Russia. And I married a Russian Molokan gal.
201line 5	In contrast, Ivan [Gureivich] Samarin lead many to America. Use his picture. Family has a good one. So may the UMCA. Any more detail about him is of high interest. He helped the Doukhobors a lot in their migration. 
201 line 7	Who/what is "Namesnik"? left off “t” --   наместник  = namestnik = Viceroy
201 middle	When was the "…petition …to Miliukov…"
202 middle	While Baku Molokans donated a clinic, some LA and San Francisco Molokans raised donations for the Red Cross (Berokoff, pages 68-69), and Arizona Molokans sat in jail for almost a year for refusing to register. 6, including my grandfather Conovaloff, were imprisoned for 4 years, the end of the war, for refusing to sign anything (Berokoff, pages 69-75). And, my grandfather's brother hid in his podval for many years near Rostov. After the war, LA Pryguny donated to the Near East Relief Society (Berokoff, p.81) to help Transcaucasian Pryguny. In the 1960's, Bill Federoff, editor of The Molokan (UMCA newsletter), continued to criticize the elders for foolishly aiding the Russians (continuing the Bezayeff prophesy (Berokoff,  p. 82). 

212 line 4 from bottom — "They [each] occupied and used lands allotted to [the] other[s], .."
213 line 4	"..the flurry [of] appeals…"
213 line 5 from bottom — define beks: rich landowner, sheep owner, military leader?  Bey = king of the Khazars
214 mid 	"…settle agriculture and local livestock pasturing."  As we did in America and Mexico.
215 line 1 	"…extreme land shortage."  The land crisis of the 1850s? Also on page 180.
215 line 7	"…productive landowners [read: Russian colonists.]  Were brackets in the original or did you add them? 
216 line 7	"…ten desiatinas.." = 27 acres = 67 hectares
217 line 6 from bottom — "1,240 desiatinas" = 3,348 acres = 8,270 Hectares = 5.23 sq. miles.
217 line 2 from bottom — "1,300 desiatinas" = 3,510 acres = 8,670 Hectares = 5.5 sq. miles.
218 line 9	"70 desiatinas" = 189 acres = 467 hectare = 0.3 sq. miles
218 line 3 from bottom — "five to six kilometers [four to five versts}" versts not in italic.  But, 1 verst = 1.067 km = 0.6629 miles.]  4 versts = 4.2 km = 2.7 miles.   5 versts = 5.3 km = 3.3 miles. 
218 line 2 from bottom — "forty to fifty sazhen'"  1 sazhen' = 2.134 m = 7 feet.  40 sazhen = 85 m = 280 ft.  50 sazhen = 107 m = 350 ft.
219 line 1	"…trample down …"  Similar to Mexican peasants trying to take land from the Prygun owners in Guadalupe. The newly elected governor promised peasants their land back from the barons. But Pryguny owned their land and didn't fight in court to keep the squatters out. Also the river flood zone through the valley and town was federal land adjacent to farms and open to squatters who camped at the edge. Seems the Pryguny knew this situation from the old country (Berokoff, Chapter 2).
219 line 7	"tagoe" ? define
219 line 8	"stogov"  = haystacks
219 last line	"1,000 desiatinas" = 2,700 acres = 6,669 hectares = 4.2 sq. miles.
221 line 2	"60 desiatinas" = 162 acres = 400 hectares = 0.25 sq. miles. This is 6 times the usual 10 desiatinas.
221 middle	Several families from Suhoi-fontan came to the US. Descendants are members of Samarin (Percy St., LA) Church. My grandmother Shubin called Samarin sobraniia, Akhtinskii sobranie.  More detail, like names, will enhance the excitement of this sentence.
223 line 1	Several families from Nizhniaia Akhta came to the US. Descendants are members of Samarin (Percy St., LA) Church.  More detail, like names, will enhance the excitement of this sentence. Also see Berokoff, page 54 Chap 3: "…Akhty, Darochichag [Darachichak/Darachak], Nikitina, and Delizhan …strong ties to Maksim's native village of Nikitina…". Any history from these villages is of high interest, and may explain the mysterious Maksimisty who now dominate American Dukh-i-zhinik ritual.  Most all of the villages on the map in Berokoff can be found in Ismail-Zade
226 middle	"two cherverts" = 16 bushels —  “chervert ' (quarter) was a unit of measure equal to approximately eight bushels”
226 middle	"..and half of [the?] barley [harvest]…"
227 line 8	"30 desiatinas" = 81 acres = 200 hectares = 1/8 sq. miles.
228 middle	"…devoid of any ethnic aspects."  Clarify. Give example of "ethnic aspect".
230 last line paragraph 1 — "… economically  [extra space] subordinate…"
233 middle, 239-249, especially 242, 247 —  Anton Chekhov in "The Horse-Robbers" characterized Molokans as ruthless vigilantes for justice.
234 middle	"The [artist] and painter…"  Use Vereschagin's drawings of a Molokan prophet and Doukhobors.
235 line 2 from bottom — Use names of brothers if available.
237 bottom	I bet you can gather a description of the political/social/economic climate in Kars oblast' that will explain why so many fled to America compared to other Molokan areas.
239 line 2	"uchastok" in italics and defined: station, district?  Section of land?
239 F93	I can't find this explained in Chap 1, maybe you meant another chapter, and better to give page numbers. 
241 last sentence — I am somewhat saddened by the blatant racism I've seen repeated by children of American Dukh-i-zhiznik rubbish men and farmers. I heard one kid in church during a meal in the 1970s tell another how to make more money in rubbish — charge more and hirer Mexicans to do the dirty work. "What color is my skin" he shouted. The other boy didn't get the point. Louder: "What color is my skin! You don't see me doing Mexican's work." Many Dukh-i-zhiznik farmers, particularly the most Maksimist, in Arizona have housed Mexicans in shacks for cheap full time farm labor. Klibanov says the most surprising statement by Rudomyotkin in the Dukh-i-zhizn’ is to get rich by hiring Muslim-Arabs
242 line 3	Any names for these drivers?
245 middle	Any name for the writer?
248 middle	"…to construct a Molokan village at a specific location…" What location, what village?
250 line 2 from bottom — I wonder if there were different attitudes regarding being billeted Muslims (non-pig-eaters) vs. Christians (pig-eaters). Some American Maksimisty never enter a ninash/pagan home, even their neighbors. Those houses are unclean with pig-eaters. However, they may brag that their home is open to help anyone in need and cite instances of neighbors (pig-eaters) who they helped.
253 middle	"…also hired land from natives…" Do you mean "rented", as in the line above or 2 lines below?
253 middle	"..(…price of two rubles per desiatina)…"  No time period — per year, per month, per forever?
253 line 2 from bottom — Italics and define "sel'koe obschestvo" Agricultural community?
254 F 135, 272 middle — As in Tula oblast today, the Doukhobors refugees kept together and insisted on their own community (Kolhoz imenya “Lev Tolstova”), while Molokans refugees in the same Chernskii raion live in parts of 4 kolhoz not owning/controlling their land or homes. Except, perhaps the Molokan village of Slobodka, of which I'm not sure. I think this illustrates a great difference in the nature, extent, scope, and management styles between Doukhobor and Molokan leaders; and, more significant, perhaps, their members inclination to submit to a leader. See a recent Molokan NEWS posting about this: 
http://molokane.org/molokan/NEWS/
The last Molokan almost "leader", Miloserdoff, died over 20 years ago. One relative joked: "Molokans are the most democratic people in the world. Everyone does as he damn pleases."
255 bottom, 256	"…Dukhobors…'Orphan Home'…." Molokans never had anything close, further supporting vast differences in their collective process and attitude. I explain to Canadian Doukhobors that most all American ethnic Molokans are Independents.
258 middle	"…shaded into one another."  Also see Teresa Muranaka's archeology PhD thesis (1990s,  University of Arizona) in which she attempts to quantify the blending of Mexican culture into the Prygun colony and compares her physical evidence with oral history reports.
259 line 7, 264 middle — I visited in Russia and escorted in LA Blokhin, a refugee Dukh-i-zhinik presbyter from Armenia, who moved to Nadezhda (east and adjacent to Stavropol'), who recently died. He spoke Russian, Armenian and Georgian "like a native" he says so he can talk this way through customs at each border crossing. While we showed him around LA, he easily spotted immigrant Armenians on the street and initiated conversations. Most older farmers in Arizona speak pretty fluent Spanish. Our elder singer often jokes in Spanish in sobranie. My grandfather died speaking better Spanish than English. Our neighbor Conovaloff went to Tijuana once and his taxi driver insisted he was from Mexico and definitely not American. But few in my parents’ generation insisted that their kids learn Russian, due to the Cold War scare, except those who immigrated from Iran.
259 middle	"…Merino …sheep." We had as many as 40 Merino sheep on our farm. In 1960 Phoenix was 10 miles away, now we are 2 miles inside the city, with a large shopping mall next to our field. 5 years ago, wild city dogs killed the last 15 of our herd. Grandmothers everywhere made thick wool blankets (odyalo, одеяло).
261 line 5	".. funeral repasts.." Define "repast", meal?  The entire list of "culturally meaningful" meals is — all regular religious holidays (different days for each Molokan sub-group), funerals, weddings, wedding tea/shower, child dedication, remembrance, and special occasions like a regional meeting or welcoming a group of guests. 
261 middle	See 157 above, Turkdogan: MHCII—Molokans in Turkey 
262 middle	Bits of the story of the Sectarian carriage/trucking business are scattered. See 156, 190 above. Somewhere you say the Jews were banned from the carriage trade as the sectarians were moved into the Transcaucasus, which helped launch them. It would be good to gather this into one section or table about the multi-dimensional difficulties from 1870-1900 — 1870 railroad and loss of trucking monopoly, 1887 conscription, theft, violence, etc…
265 line 5 	"us/them". I've only heard "nashi/ninashi" ours/not ours. Ninashi are forbidden, even extended in English as "Oakie".  "He/she married an Oakie."
265 line 8	"chosen people"  The Maksimisty here are impregnated with this lesson/heritage which caused much debate in America.
266 middle	"…no marked exchange of beliefs or practices." Hear, hear! We appear to have gotten millennial fever from the passing Harmonists. Did the prayer rug come from the Orthodox and/or Muslims. We kneel/bow down to the ground in prayer like the Muslim namaz (see Turkdogan). And you detail the sectarian adoption of Muslim law — eye for an eye… 
266 bottom	Any names for these converted? This text and citation (F184) is repeated/identical to 279 F18.
267 line 1	See Berokoff, page 13, and on Molokan NEWS, Joyce Bivin's work. She is working on the history of her Armenian Molokan family and church. She may have located Karakala, the village converted. Also see Demos Shakarian: "The Happiest People on Earth" (out-of-print paperback). The first pages describe, but don't name the Prygun/ Molokan/ Klubnikin prophesy to leave the Transcausasus. 
267 line 2	Do you find solid evidence that Maksim G. Rudometkin was a Prygun leader, or leader of a separate movement/branch. Many diaspora Dukh-i-zhiniki believe these to be 2 separate groups, although the book Dukh i zhizn’ was placed on the tables after 1928 and all Prygun congregations adopted the "new ritual". Kerman Dukh-i-zhiniki  historian, Morrie Pivovaroff, who visited Russia twice with me, talked with Inikova, and is writing the history of Kerman, California, Russians, and has your thesis, claims that by ritual all American Prygun churches must be classified as Maksimisty, though most members do not support Maksimist doctrine nor do they believe they are Maksimisty, probably because they don't understand what they are actually doing in Russian. Many elders, like my grandfather Conovaloff, never read from the Dukh i zhizn’, but tolerated the zealots and occasionally criticized them. Also, "Dukhovnie" in Russia deny they are Pryguny, but they have jumpers/prophets (male and female). I have not met anyone in Russia who voluntarily labels a group as Pryguny — it's Postoiannye, Dukhovnie, Maksimisty. When I mention Pryguny, the Dukhovnie  say they are also Pryguny, but do not want to be confused with Maksimisty. All Russian ethnic Molokans seem to label Maksimisty as a distinct group. Interesting, when American Dukh-i-zhiniki tried to visit their counterparts in Russia, they have clashed over ritual to the extent that several visiting American Dukh-i-zhinik have been told up front to "mind their own business" and "don't tell us what to do" and been denied as guests. In 2007 I extensively visited 50 of the 60 congregations in Stavropolskii krai showing each my list of all congregations in the world. Those that use the book Dukh i zhin’ made it clear they did not want to be listed among the other Russian sectarians by faith as Molokane, Pryguny or Maksimisty, rather with reference to their ritual book — Dukh-i-zhiniki.
267 F185	Use the photo of the Armenian Pryguny.  
267 F185	And we should know these censored "..rumors of sexual impropriety…" which I think has historic importance. Wallace mentions this and self-censors his book "Russia" —"…Jumpers…the erotic element is disagreeably prominent.. …and here begins a scene which cannot be here described …for the general public." Canadian Doukhobors tell me that the last "spiritual birth" (group religious sex) among the Freedomites was Gabe Podovinikoff, a fellow my age I met several times, who was destined to be their leader. As he matured and learned of his role, his father Joe, considered a very dangerous Sons of Freedom, joined the Community Doukhobors, USCC. I met them as prominent USCC Doukhobors. Gabe refused his "divinely ordained role" and instead took up historical preservation of an old "dom" in Grand Forks and living with an English girl. In the 1970s the Son of Freeedom were starving for a leader to appear. The censored Dukh-i-zhizn’ mentions "spiritual wives". Ethel Dunn discounts the sexual part as fable, but Gabe is living proof. The most Maksimist congregation in LA has secret rituals which, I hear, disgusts other presvitery. Also, the Freedomite leader Sorokin sired daughters from several families, it was an honor for their parents. This is the conflict of New World morality placed on Old World religions, with numerous undocumented compromises occurring to hide the embarrassing heritage and fabricate an acceptable replacement. This rewriting of history needs to be presented in context.
268 line 2	Italicize and define: "arkhaluki" = outer shirt, with high collar, wore in many styles by men and women in Caucasus and Central Asia.
268 F188	Indeed most all of the sectarian villages on Ismail-Zade's map are ethnic Molokan. Only in the Doukhobor areas are you likely to meet a non-Molokan Russian.
276 last sentence, 300 top, 324 — RE: Molokan to Baptist. Mosei Bogdanoff is a former Molokan elder, now a Baptist minister in LA. He was born in Rostov, migrated to Turkistan, fled to Iran, migrated to the US. In 1960, he was the lead singer at Persian Church (Kern Ave) in LA, and Chairman of the UMCA Religious Committee. He attended a Billy Graham presentation and soon converted to Baptist because it "made more sense". In 1997 I met him in Pyatigorsk for the first time, though I knew his son who married and joined the LA Big Church and, because he can read Russian, is a besednik. Mosei was in charge of dedicating 100 Russian Baptist churches under construction as they were completed in Russia. His brother married my dad's cousin. All other siblings are Baptists in LA.
274 line 2	RE: illiteracy. You haven't described how peasants got the decree announcements — by town/public crier (glashatae), and who gets this job, sectarian or other. Few saw or read a newspaper.
274 line 3 from bottom — Earlier you consistently call Pryguny a sub-group of Molokans, here they are a denomination. Also implied in 322 middle.
277 F13	Include the conversion of 70+ Molokan families in Saratov to Judaism, and their migration to Palestine/Israel while up to 4,500 others were fleeing to American, the leader professing to be of New Jerusalem and Zion in prayer and song. Jews called the self-converted gery. Not real Jews. Also, Canadian Freedomites name a mountain near Castlegar Mount Zion, and both groups have songs about "gora Zion".
278 line 1	Perhaps all 5: Consolidation (combining 2 or more identities, 276 top) as with the Maksimisty. Some of the Pryguny who were ignited in the Milky Waters area, migrate to Armenia anxious to join Christ and a local, Maksim, takes over with some, probably not all. He may have been a Khlyst. Did he convert them to his group, or did he combine 2 or more ideologies into a new group? Maksim researchers in Oregon lean to a conclusion he blended Klysty with Pryguny. Also, I estimate about 5% of Russian sectarians were Pryguny. What do you say?  They dominate in America because they migrated in larger numbers than others. 
280 line 6	"…21.7 …who survived…"  Does this mean 1/2 died?
281	Graph Table 1 for visual impact.
283 top	In what villages or what names were converted?
283 mid	[end of line]  "….influences," and "          remove space AFTER " and before causal.
285 line 6	Define pomeshchik: landlord
288 line 1	"…declined from [not form] the 1840s…"
292 middle	Define udel'naia: independent
293 ;line 2	"..with a^^baby."  Extra space
307 mid	Different clan. My Konovalov's are from Saratov
315 bottom	80 sazhen' = 560 feet = 171 m.
318 mid	"apostasy": abandonment of one's religious faith
320 mid	"uezdnyi nachal'nik" Italicize and define: district chief?
326 line 1	"…Tiflis Baptist community fractured…" Today Molokans tell me of the "Sukhoi Baptist" church in Tiblisi which is composed of many former Molokans and is considered a semi-Molokan (affiliated) group.
330-332	"…violent opposition…to Baptists…"  About 1973, the LA Milikoy congregation held a special meeting one week night to decide what to do with a member, George Kostrikin originally Postoyannyie, who evangelized Christianity to anyone. LA Dukh-i-zhiniki were told "by prophesy" to hide their faith from the non-believers/government. He had a reputation for confronting JWs on the street, stopping Mormons bicycling, visiting other religions to learn, discussing what he learned, etc. To the astonishment of many who liked George and appreciated his continual testifying of his beliefs, these elders ordered him to stop his “Baptist” behavior, or leave their faith. He left, reluctantly. This was one of a series of events among very active LA Dukh-i-zhiniki who left their congregations to "join the body of Christ". The oral history repeats the observation that we sectarians fled Russia only to recreate the Orthodox Church in America again (personal persecution, mindless ritual, uniform dress, little substantive charity work, self aggrandizement, prejudice, racism, no Christian brotherly love, …)
To the most extreme, cleansing of the brotherhood happened 2 years ago when the most Maksimist American congregation, on Clark street, ostracized all but members of their congregation. About half were evicted or voluntarily left. This reminded me of a similar announcement a few years ago by the Hasidic Jewish colony in New York state. See their letter mailed to all American Dukh-i-zhiniki congregations. 
335 F152	"inoslavsty" italics, define:  heterodoxy, non-orthodox
340 bottom	"…sectarians…..distrust of all Orthodox…"  When I posted our 1997 visit with the batushka of the oldest Orthodox church in Tambov on the web, I also listed the Youth Conference attendees on the same page. Dukh-i-zhiniki in LA ridiculed 4 American Dukh-i-zhiniki listed. These men did not actually meet the priest because they left early to look for other Dukh-i-zhiniki. They were verbally attacked only because their names were on the same web page as an Orthodox priest. Their response was so drastic that they panicked and demanded//shouted (by fax, and phone) that their names be removed immediately. They went so far as to demand that any trace of their attendance be erased because they were not there officially. Our main Dukh-i-zhiniki in Arizona, still recites from the the atrocities inflicted upon his ancestors by the Orthodox, and cannot forgive or discuss them without expressing hatred, as he was taught in his family. On the other hand, the Russian Orthodox priest stationed in San Francisco in the early 1990s became good friends with many Molokane and I was there when he first attended and spoke in their assembly and was invited to recite a prayer.  
342 line 7	"…traveling show…"  During the 1920s-40s in Oake's Lot (a vacant lot) in the "Flats", the LA Russian and immigrant ghetto, a Pentecostal tent for evangelic services often appeared. So many Russian sectarians attended that volunteers translated the presentations. Many Pryguny sought the Amy McPherson evangelic shows, and discussed them.
385	No Wallace, Macenzie, "Russia".

You may face your publisher's or school's attitude that a "scholarly" work is "appropriate" — long winding sentences, big words, assumptions that the reader has extensive knowledge and vocabulary of the material. This also makes the book hard to understand for the average ethnic Molokan and Doukhobor readers. I had this debate with Linda O'brien-Rothe while producing "The Origins of Molokan Singing". With Ethel and Steve's guidance, and Linda's approval, I added charts and graphs, then we compromised with 2 versions of the tape. The ethnic Molokan version had a side "b" narrated with a summary of the book (the extra transcript was also included), including examples—a lecture, for those moderately literate. 
With yours, I don't recommend a second version, but a lot of explanatory tables, indexes, charts, and maps will really help: 
1.	Vertical timeline with Tsars and summary of management styles on one side, and a summary of laws/edicts/orders affecting sectarians on the other.
2.	Index, of course. I count 30 ethic Molokans named, only one known by Americans.
3.	Glossary, either at the end or as a sidebar, or chart/table where needed. 
4.	List of important place names, map locations, and summary of events. Even an index of all place names and map/locations. 
5.	Maps to show the old 1800 locations and boundaries, New Russia (south Ukraine), newer 1900 boundaries, times of land acquisition, Transcaucasus (Ismail-Zade), wars, people movements (Molokans, Pryguny, Doukhobors, Germans, Mennonites, Subbotniki, Harmonists, Khlysty,  …), ….